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The Tears of a Broken Heart

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Date: 11/19/2018 6:42:00 PM
Very creative, Jesse! Looks simple, but I do notice those small variations that give life to those falling tears! Congrats on your fine win. Sandra :)
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Date: 11/13/2018 9:03:00 PM
Very clever Jesse. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 11/11/2018 10:20:00 PM
Awesome , congratulations on your win...
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Date: 11/11/2018 2:24:00 PM
I am sure you are smiling, and tears are not falling, at moment. :) Congratulations Jesse, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/11/2018 1:23:00 PM
very creative! Congrats on the win, Jesse
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Date: 11/11/2018 1:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jesse. Well done.
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Date: 11/11/2018 11:15:00 AM
Nicely done, Jesse, congrats. John
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Date: 11/11/2018 11:13:00 AM
A pool of tears, nicely done. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 11/11/2018 9:56:00 AM
Nicely done - very effective. Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
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Date: 11/1/2018 9:11:00 AM
- A shape poem ... lovely done Jesse, good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2018 8:23:00 PM
When tears fall like this, they can linger softly upon the heart. It seems as though you have created this moment, with your words caressing the bottom of the page. Beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:32:00 PM
very cool!
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