Jesse Rowe Poet Shape

The Tears of a Broken Heart

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10.15.18
Contest:  One Word With Style

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Sandra Haight November 19, 2018 at 6:42 PM Very creative, Jesse! Looks simple, but I do notice those small variations that give life to those falling tears! Congrats on your fine win. Sandra :)

Connie Marcum Wong November 13, 2018 at 9:03 PM Very clever Jesse. Congratulations on your win! : )

Eve Roper November 11, 2018 at 10:20 PM Awesome , congratulations on your win...

Brandy Nicole November 11, 2018 at 2:24 PM I am sure you are smiling, and tears are not falling, at moment. :) Congratulations Jesse, on this win. ~ Brandy

Line Gauthier November 11, 2018 at 1:23 PM Congrats on your win, Jesse. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2018 at 1:23 PM very creative! Congrats on the win, Jesse

John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 11:15 AM Nicely done, Jesse, congrats. John

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 11, 2018 at 11:13 AM A pool of tears, nicely done. Congratulations on your win! xomo

John Michaels November 11, 2018 at 9:56 AM Nicely done - very effective. Congrats on your win. Regards, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2018 at 9:11 AM - A shape poem ... lovely done Jesse, good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole October 16, 2018 at 8:23 PM When tears fall like this, they can linger softly upon the heart. It seems as though you have created this moment, with your words caressing the bottom of the page. Beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy

P.S. Awtry October 15, 2018 at 11:32 PM very cool!