The Tattered Old Jacket

An old army jacket so tattered and torn, 
His most prized possession was thoroughly worn.
He said every time I put it on it takes me back to better days,
Where we tried to bring freedom to a land so far away.

He said it was a time our country was changing, trying to bring equality to all men,
A time of racial hatred I thought would never end.
A time to break down barriers and extend a friendly hand,
A time to right wrongs in such a glorious land.

I asked had you served in Nam, he said yes, I pulled two whole tours,
He said after the first tour I came home but it was too much for me to endure.
He said I got tired of getting spit on so I went back where I belonged,
Back to others like me who also had been wronged.

It left me with disabilities that kept me from steady work,
I lost my wife and family, they were ashamed of my twitch and nervous jerk.
He said they’ve got me on medication, but it doesn’t help that much,
He said friend do you know how long it’s been since I’ve felt a gentle touch.

We both started tearing up as I hugged him oh so tight,
I said what can I do to help you, he said that’s okay I’ll be alright.
He said I’ll just be glad when it’s all over and the Lord comes for me,
Then I can remove this old jacket for God will set me free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 4:10 PM
Mail for you.
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April 23, 2009 at 5:34 AM
Oh Ron, this brought tears to my eyes. So powerful and sadly true. Amazingly written. My heart cries out for so many. Warmest wishes. Love, Shar
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April 22, 2009 at 3:13 PM
Oh my goodness, Ronald, this is such a glorious poem; fiulled with so much emotion, I teared up - honest and true, this is so (sad seems so trite a word) but sad. so very empty, but STRONG; the man is strong. thank you for your wonderful comment today, I am humbled by it; I can only hope that I was true to Him. Beautiful poetry, God bless, Kristin
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April 22, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Wow! What a profound and deeply moving poem. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! The message is so insightful. This is one of your best poems. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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April 22, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Nice write and the emotions come back remembering Nam. Your words do touch a person.
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April 22, 2009 at 11:51 AM
This story certainly makes the reader "tear up," remembering the horrible way our Vietnam soldiers were treated when they returned home. All war makes me sad, but none impacted me more than Vietnam. We sent our young people there and then turned our backs on them, just like the "tattered and torn" jacket. Genuinely moving, Ronald.
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