The Tarnished Knight

Bratwen was a knight of slight ill repute
his good deeds oft times ending up caput 
he strived to reach the halls of fame
yet it always seemed to end up in blame.

He heard tales of a damsel oh so very fair
who appeared to have vanished into thin air.
Her suitors one and all most hot her to find,
yet her captor wished in wedlock her to bind.

The king enraged very soon did proclaim
whoever saved her, honour could reclaim
Bratwen set out, his heart by beauty enflamed
the monster in his sights he quickly tamed.

Astoria so happy to be free at him glanced
fell in love and to Bratwen became financed
they circled that hall of fame as they danced
his steed carried them away while both romanced.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 10:38 AM
I love this! A knight's tale with economy of words yet great imagery!
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:22 AM
ty Kim hugs
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 5:43 PM
the tarnished knight makes GOOD!!! Love how it all ended up, like a true fairy tale should.
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:20 AM
ty Andrea well I could not leave him tarnished now could I lol hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 8:04 PM
Fun one!
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:19 AM
ty Rick hugs
Kiser Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Quite a cute story.
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 4:14 PM
ty ML hugs
Maverick Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 3:28 PM
Enjoyed this medieval tale Shadow, glad to see Bratwen and his bride are making the most of a monsterous opportunity ..' L O L)) thanks for the great placement..'
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 4:13 PM
ty Joe hugs
Pinet Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 10:56 AM
You describe your experience perfectly and it takes shape in my mind’s eye. You imagery is top notch and brings life to the character’s profile. Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 4:13 PM
ty Emile hugs
Onclaud Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 9:38 AM
ohhh, sweetly done with a renaissance touch to it, shadow... so lovely!.. huggs
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 9:50 AM
ty Nette hugs
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