The Tableau of My Muse

Soft, Gentle, Calm Eyes
Gazing upon mine
Glowing from within
Pools of evergreen
Entrancing my soul
And gone in a blink

3/17/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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March 28, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Surreal flicker of enlivenment, congrats on your win!
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March 29, 2021 at 4:54 AM
I appreciate it, thank you!
Y. Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Hi Avery, This is a good take on the contest theme. Nice twist at the end. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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March 29, 2021 at 4:54 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis :-)
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March 26, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Such an original tableau. Congratulations on breaking new ground. Cheers Brian
Won Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so much!
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:14 AM
what a great twist at the end. Awesomely unique. Congrats
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March 26, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea
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March 26, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Congrats on your win Avery Nicely done
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March 26, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Thank you for sponsoring :-)
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