The System Needs Revitalization
the system needs revitalization
in order for new creations to be vital creation
knowing this and more, i wonder if we could talk
then afterwards find a new root of renewal via a quiet walk
when we become reenergized, we can bask in the new ebb and flow
no matter the temperamental tendencies of real life, you are still the star of my show
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