The Sweetest Nip Huitain

Branded eternally by blood,
beauty is no longer fleeting.
So burgundy soft with a thud,
from head to toe left secreting.
I’m a vampire rose, flesh eating;
I’ll always pick a lush dessert.
Your sugar spikes are depleting,
the sweetest nip could never hurt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 5:31 PM
Each time I read I learn of new poetry forms. This poem though obsessed by blood read very well. Nip anytime.
Udaeta Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 5:41 PM
Thank you! Blessings
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