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The Sweet Scent of Failure

THE SWEET SCENT OF FAILURE I will speak in praise of failure Long unrecognised: its worth But with loss I won’t regale ya Of its grieving there’s no dearth For the striving and the yearning That sweet savour of success Counts for nothing in our earning With no challenge and duress It would be of no avail All that travail and the vying With no chance that you could fail You would triumph without trying He who walks upon the sea With no fear of inundation May surrender to ennui When he’s performed one more flotation Picture living out a dream Goals accomplished - end of track! Always on the winning team? You’d tie one arm behind your back! It’s the chances of defeat That give each day that added zing Hold back on that job complete! If you’ve no new flight to take wing So next time you take the field Think: “It’s a game! To lose - no sin” Then with honour, brace to yield! And give my side a chance to win

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Date: 7/8/2021 5:18:00 PM
Love the message, and the humorous ending too, Geoffrey. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 6/27/2021 1:25:00 PM
the last line was SO COOL. Great job here, Geoffrey.
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Date: 6/15/2021 12:44:00 PM
Many home truths here Geoffrey. There's certainly no creativity without failure. ..and you can't make an omelette without breaking eggs. :) It's how you deal with failure that's important. There's great cadence and rhyme in your poem. I enjoyed the read.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/17/2021 12:10:00 PM
Many thanks for your detailed and thoughtful feedback, Gary.
Date: 6/11/2021 12:39:00 PM
Geoffrey, There's a lesson to be gleaned from your stanzas. And I thank you for the reminder. Sweet juice never savored without encountering a few sour apples. -Richard
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 6/27/2021 11:10:00 AM
A Sunday musing here, a second look more carefully. -R
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/12/2021 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, my friend. Enjoy the sweet and the sour sweep-stake, and have some success.

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