The Surrounding Sky

Darkness, ominous. Threatening clouds, lightning aglow. God's mystery show. 1/12/2021 Rhyming Haiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/13/2021 11:14:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, the sky does show amazing thigs. i love the clouds looking at the different shapes. They are always different. Hugs Darlene xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2021 3:48:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, For the longest time people have not lived together. For reasons unknown can not get along peaceful. We should all get along with each other. We are all God's children. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/13/2021 12:59:00 PM

You know the clouds are as varied as we are. However, we humans cannot live in peace. Maybe Darlene, we should be like the clouds...and just be? Instead of insulting other people. You have not seen what I have seen here by PS bullies. Therer are also sane and kind people here like you Darlene. As lovely as a cloud.... Pangie xxxooo

John Watt

Date: 1/12/2021 9:35:00 PM

Amen to that last line. Some amazing imagery in your short three lines, but He is a pretty amazing artist. As are you. Well done, friend ~ John

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/13/2021 12:34:00 PM

Hi John.... He is the ultimate artist, as you say. Bless you, Pangie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2021 5:16:00 PM

Nice! None of my usual loaded, sarcastic comments this time. Just -- well-penned. Thanks, Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/12/2021 5:24:00 PM

G! I don't think your sarcastic just witty. I would deliete any sarcastic comments. I just see them as "honest". A virtue, I see and appreciate in you. No BS...just straight talk I think it's a Chicago "thang"...to tell it like it is. Remember that old song? Tell it like it is? Pangie.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/12/2021 3:07:00 PM

Ominous indeed! Squeezy hug, sweet saint of a lady.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/12/2021 5:06:00 PM

What a comment Kim, i truly am not worthy of. Hugs, OK. Saint, hardly. I started writing for my college paper and got in trouble for writing the truth. Guess what? That was a lifetime ago, and I will not be quiet in the face of wrongdoing. Not till I am dead. See my comment to Tom, please. Blessings be yours, Pangie hugs xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2021 1:51:00 PM

Sounds like a giant storm is brewimg up. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/12/2021 4:59:00 PM

Tom...Looks ugly outside... Matches the smarmy ethics in progress here. Eeks. Prefer storms to scumbags. Did not people ever learn ethics? I think they eat hate cereal for breakfast. The millionaire narratives spew the same on junk TV channels. I honestly could not sleep if I set about to harm You or anyone....Nabobs of negativity I know are across all Continents....dear, oh dear. Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/12/2021 1:43:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Pangie! BoB

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/12/2021 1:45:00 PM

Bob.....thank you. Burt you see much beauty where you are! Pangie