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The Surrounding Sky



           Darkness, ominous.
           Threatening clouds, lightning aglow.
           God's mystery show.



                  1/12/2021


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Darlene De Beaulieu

January 13, 2021 at 11:14 AM

Hello Panagiota, the sky does show amazing thigs. i love the clouds looking at the different shapes. They are always different. Hugs Darlene xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 13, 2021 at 3:48 PM

Hello Panagiota, For the longest time people have not lived together. For reasons unknown can not get along peaceful. We should all get along with each other. We are all God's children. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios

January 13, 2021 at 12:59 PM

You know the clouds are as varied as we are. However, we humans cannot live in peace. Maybe Darlene, we should be like the clouds...and just be? Instead of insulting other people. You have not seen what I have seen here by PS bullies. Therer are also sane and kind people here like you Darlene. As lovely as a cloud.... Pangie xxxooo

John Watt

January 12, 2021 at 9:35 PM

Amen to that last line. Some amazing imagery in your short three lines, but He is a pretty amazing artist. As are you. Well done, friend ~ John

Panagiota Romios

January 13, 2021 at 12:34 PM

Hi John.... He is the ultimate artist, as you say. Bless you, Pangie

Gershon Wolf

January 12, 2021 at 5:16 PM

Nice! None of my usual loaded, sarcastic comments this time. Just -- well-penned. Thanks, Pangie

Panagiota Romios

January 12, 2021 at 5:24 PM

G! I don't think your sarcastic just witty. I would deliete any sarcastic comments. I just see them as "honest". A virtue, I see and appreciate in you. No BS...just straight talk I think it's a Chicago "thang"...to tell it like it is. Remember that old song? Tell it like it is? Pangie.

Tom Cunningham

January 12, 2021 at 1:51 PM

Sounds like a giant storm is brewimg up. Tom

Panagiota Romios

January 12, 2021 at 4:59 PM

Tom...Looks ugly outside... Matches the smarmy ethics in progress here. Eeks. Prefer storms to scumbags. Did not people ever learn ethics? I think they eat hate cereal for breakfast. The millionaire narratives spew the same on junk TV channels. I honestly could not sleep if I set about to harm You or anyone....Nabobs of negativity I know are across all Continents....dear, oh dear. Pangie