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The Sunset

I look at the sky in an awe, As it rains telling bout it's flaws, Who could deny it's beauty? Well isn't that what have been our duty? We torture it with smoke, Still it gives us moments to applaud, The low breeze of cold air, Gives us shivers everywhere. Sky also cries when it's heavy You human, why are you even ashamed to tell ur teddy? Laugh like the sky does Remember rainbow comes after heavy dusk Sun is shining high Why don't u chase it like the sky? There are heights you can reach Why are you still afraid to preach? Smile it's the sunset Everything gets better where the the story ends at Aj~

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Date: 9/15/2023 8:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your "Sunset" thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Aprajita Jha
Date: 9/15/2023 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness!
Date: 9/14/2023 1:34:00 AM
Everything gets better eventually, that’s exactly what sunsets remind us. How beautiful is this poem. Absolutely loved reading this
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Aprajita Jha
Date: 9/14/2023 8:48:00 AM
thank you for the positive feedback, sunsets are always beautiful and teach us something

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