The Sunset

I look at the sky in an awe, 
As it rains telling bout it's flaws,
Who could deny it's beauty?
Well isn't that what have been our duty?
We torture it with smoke,
Still it gives us moments to applaud,
The low breeze of cold air,
Gives us shivers everywhere.
Sky also cries when it's heavy 
You human, why are you even ashamed to tell ur teddy?
Laugh like the sky does
Remember rainbow comes after heavy dusk 
Sun is shining high
Why don't u chase it like the sky?
There are heights you can reach
Why are you still afraid to preach?
Smile it's the sunset 
Everything gets better where the the story ends at
Aj~
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Agustin Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your "Sunset" thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Jha Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 8:23 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness!
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Everything gets better eventually, that’s exactly what sunsets remind us. How beautiful is this poem. Absolutely loved reading this
Jha Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 8:48 AM
thank you for the positive feedback, sunsets are always beautiful and teach us something
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