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The Sunrise Was Singing

The sunrise was singing The sunrise was singing as I rose from bed The sweetest of melodies played in my head Harmonies floated so soft on the air Rose petal whispers this morning to share Dewdrop concertos on cool winter breeze Dawn’s early arias flowed through the trees Symphonies echoed, horizons did shine Daffodils humming in three quarter time Then when you kissed me I found it was clear It was not the sun on this morning I hear This wonderful tune that sang down from above Was the perfect sound of our beautiful love Good morning Soupers

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Heidi Sands

Date: 1/20/2017 9:25:00 AM

What a beautiful poem for this morning! Thanks for sharing Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 9:54:00 AM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/20/2017 8:12:00 AM

I'm ready for those rose petal whispers...Good morning and happy weekend

Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 8:31:00 AM

Good morning Tim. Yep, the weekend can't get here fast enough for me.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/20/2017 7:59:00 AM

I can smell all those flowers flourishing on page...What a beautiful morning it seems..Mine was too..and the afernoon even brighter...:).This is a song ...Got me humming along..Good morning. :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 8:31:00 AM

Good morning Charmaine. I am happy you are humming this morning, it adds the perfect harmony to the poem.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/20/2017 7:37:00 AM

You are really dialed into nature when you can hear daffodils humming in three quarter time ... Wow. Magnificent poetry, Chris. I agree w/Connie about combining nature and music. Very effective prose. Paints a beautiful 3D picture in one's mind. This poem sings w/joy and love. Much love to you always.

Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 8:30:00 AM

Thanks Freddie, so very much. Both topics, well all three, Music, nature and love are all very dear to me.

Darren White

Date: 1/20/2017 7:31:00 AM

Can I have an Espresso to go with your humming daffodils? Morning Chris, always such a pleasure to wake up like this :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 8:29:00 AM

Sure, no problem...coming right up. :) Good morning Darren.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/20/2017 6:42:00 AM

I love the way you entwine music with nature, painting a vivid picture in the mind. Beautiful Chris! Pretty early for me here...I am just going to sleep. Nite. ; ) 7

Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 8:29:00 AM

Good night Connie. Thank you for stopping by before bedtime. I appreciate your kindness always.