Chris Green Poet Rhyme

The Sunrise Was Singing

The sunrise was singing


The sunrise was singing
as I rose from bed
The sweetest of melodies 
played in my head

Harmonies floated
so soft on the air
Rose petal whispers
this morning to share

Dewdrop concertos
on cool winter breeze  
Dawn’s early arias
flowed through the trees

Symphonies echoed,
horizons did shine
Daffodils humming
in three quarter time

Then when you kissed me
I found it was clear
It was not the sun 
on this morning I hear

This wonderful tune
that sang down from above
Was the perfect sound
of our beautiful love

Good morning Soupers

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Heidi Sands January 20, 2017 at 9:25 AM What a beautiful poem for this morning! Thanks for sharing Chris :) Chris Green January 20, 2017 at 9:54 AM Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

Tim Smith January 20, 2017 at 8:12 AM I'm ready for those rose petal whispers...Good morning and happy weekend Chris Green January 20, 2017 at 8:31 AM Good morning Tim. Yep, the weekend can't get here fast enough for me.

Charmaine Chircop January 20, 2017 at 7:59 AM I can smell all those flowers flourishing on page...What a beautiful morning it seems..Mine was too..and the afernoon even brighter...:).This is a song ...Got me humming along..Good morning. :) Chris Green January 20, 2017 at 8:31 AM Good morning Charmaine. I am happy you are humming this morning, it adds the perfect harmony to the poem.

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 20, 2017 at 7:37 AM You are really dialed into nature when you can hear daffodils humming in three quarter time ... Wow. Magnificent poetry, Chris. I agree w/Connie about combining nature and music. Very effective prose. Paints a beautiful 3D picture in one's mind. This poem sings w/joy and love. Much love to you always. Chris Green January 20, 2017 at 8:30 AM Thanks Freddie, so very much. Both topics, well all three, Music, nature and love are all very dear to me.

Darren White January 20, 2017 at 7:31 AM Can I have an Espresso to go with your humming daffodils? Morning Chris, always such a pleasure to wake up like this :) Chris Green January 20, 2017 at 8:29 AM Sure, no problem...coming right up. :) Good morning Darren.

Connie Marcum Wong January 20, 2017 at 6:42 AM I love the way you entwine music with nature, painting a vivid picture in the mind. Beautiful Chris! Pretty early for me here...I am just going to sleep. Nite. ; ) 7 Chris Green January 20, 2017 at 8:29 AM Good night Connie. Thank you for stopping by before bedtime. I appreciate your kindness always.