Sara Kendrick Poet Sijo

The Sunrise

The sunrise, pink magenta
Against wispy white clouds

Sudden noise, a lightning bolt
The sky shattered, the air rolls back

Thunder claps, nitrogen floats down
All plants dark green, spring's rain storm  

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 6:27 AM thunder claps...:) flawless imagery with each words. :D wow.. ! God bless you.. :)

Robert Nehls June 17, 2014 at 1:12 PM Quite descriptive, Sara. Natures beautiful display. I could see and feel it all. Very well done.... Robert.

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2014 at 11:46 PM Sara, this imagery is spectacular... I don't mind this kind of storm...Linda

Carolyn Devonshire June 16, 2014 at 5:28 PM Dear Sara, What a vivid description of a thunder storm rolling in at day break! Love this one. It goes to my faves. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2014 at 3:44 PM oh, I think this is sijo using the extra small lines, right? I remember reading about this. Nice one, Sara.

Nette Onclaud June 16, 2014 at 1:52 PM wonderful execution of the form and definitely lyrical in thought as well, sara..well done !.. huggs

Jadazzle United June 16, 2014 at 12:38 PM stunning imagery - I love driving to work when we have a glorious sunrise and the sky is magenta and orange and simply glorious makes my heart life:-) hugs Jan xxx