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The Sunrise

The sunrise, pink magenta Against wispy white clouds Sudden noise, a lightning bolt The sky shattered, the air rolls back Thunder claps, nitrogen floats down All plants dark green, spring's rain storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/19/2014 6:27:00 AM
thunder claps...:) flawless imagery with each words. :D wow.. ! God bless you.. :)
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Date: 6/17/2014 1:12:00 PM
Quite descriptive, Sara. Natures beautiful display. I could see and feel it all. Very well done.... Robert.
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Date: 6/16/2014 11:46:00 PM
Sara, this imagery is spectacular... I don't mind this kind of storm...Linda
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Date: 6/16/2014 5:28:00 PM
Dear Sara, What a vivid description of a thunder storm rolling in at day break! Love this one. It goes to my faves. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2014 3:44:00 PM
oh, I think this is sijo using the extra small lines, right? I remember reading about this. Nice one, Sara.
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Date: 6/16/2014 1:52:00 PM
wonderful execution of the form and definitely lyrical in thought as well, sara..well done !.. huggs
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Date: 6/16/2014 12:38:00 PM
stunning imagery - I love driving to work when we have a glorious sunrise and the sky is magenta and orange and simply glorious makes my heart life:-) hugs Jan xxx
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