The Sundress Contest

The sundress caused duress and uncertainess
as she lay in the sand with a childless man. 
Their kiss filled with grit but she just couldn't quit,
Til she ran off with some guy named Pitt!


Contest: The Sundress
Sponsor:  Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet
Submitted by: Judy Konos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 5:29 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Judy. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 10:52 AM
that would be me, judy... love brad pit, lol.... way to go for this tourney; winning wishes! :) hugggs, nette
Horsman Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Hi Judy, this is a wonderful poem in its own right, but it is not a limerick, you'll need 5 lines, (see Soup's Forms) Harry
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