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 For young love who experience their first of maybe many heartbreaks until the right time..

The Sun Will Rise Again

Have you ever loved and been disillusioned
Causing you to come to the conclusion
Love is like the sun at the end of the day
It slowly slips over the horizon and fades away

Through the night tears fall from your eyes
Tossing, turning, memories of good times and lies
The dark moon glimmering through the window
Flooding your heart with sadness of love can't rekindle

Just as the sun slips over the horizon and fades away
It returns with brilliant bright colors the very next day
A ray of sunlight drying each tear
Trying to heal your heart and take away your fear

Fear of never another love and  best friend
When will this heartache ever end
Just as the sun fades over the horizon each day
Over the hills and valleys in the morning it always finds it's way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/8/2019 8:10:00 AM
So accurate. Loved it!
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/8/2019 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond. Lifts my spirits
Date: 8/7/2019 9:51:00 AM
was just skimming through and your poem caught my eye. am guilty of not following with dedication all you fellow poets .but was taken with your work am so pleased that i took the time as this was a little gem keep up the good work.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/7/2019 10:04:00 AM
Glad you stopped by and thank you. Life has been busy, and I am guilty lately of the same. I do hope it lifts someone's heartache.
Date: 6/13/2017 5:56:00 PM
The title struck me and I am glad it did. Exceptional verses giving an illuminating message of heart and soul.. Let thy pen fly, let thy soul speak and thy kind heart sing often! A fav.....
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/7/2019 10:05:00 AM
Love your response, you have the heart of a poet, thank you
Date: 6/5/2016 10:20:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comments! This title caught my eye and "the sun will rise again!" I will enjoy reading your library!
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/6/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/30/2016 11:20:00 AM
Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 5/30/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.
Date: 5/29/2016 7:04:00 PM
A lovely poem, Shirley, and you show such hope and promise in your metaphors of sunset and sunrise...end and new beginning. Nicely written. Sandra
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 5/30/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/19/2016 9:46:00 AM
Of course, Sun also arises...and smiles to a gifted poet: Who knows the wonderful secret.Love.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 5/19/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment.
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