Njeri Hunjeri Poet Verse

The Sun, the Baby's Eyes

On your first arrival to the world, you shine
No time predicts, the hour glass gazes
Spinning the golden wheels
Sunflowers dancing in the fields
Your rays penetrating the darkest of corners
Quenching every sorrowful soul
Your colors dancing in old and new, always keeping in wonder

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Teddy Kimathi August 28, 2015 at 12:11 PM Showers of applause to your WIN Njeri! Hongera ;-) Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 4:01 AM Asanti sana Teddy

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 8:50 PM Sweet how you relate it to baby's eyes. Big congrats in the contest. Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 4:01 AM Thank you Andrea

Alexis Y. August 18, 2015 at 7:15 AM Nijeri, congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 4:00 AM Thank u Alexis

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:17 PM Njeri. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT Njeri Hunjeri August 20, 2015 at 8:18 PM Lol i did break a rule by using 8 lines. I hadn't even realized it. Thank u SKAT. I enjoyed being in the contest

Darlene Gifford August 6, 2015 at 9:28 PM Loved your poem. The imagery of the newborns eyes are fantastic. Sunflowers dancing in the fields. a great line. A 7. also gave you a 7 on the last poem I read, but forgot to tell you. Njeri Hunjeri August 9, 2015 at 3:58 AM Thank you Darlene. I appreciate the 7's.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 5, 2015 at 8:17 AM - Lovely written, Njeri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Njeri Hunjeri August 6, 2015 at 8:13 AM Thank you Anne-Lise