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The Sun Loves the Moon

Once upon a time on a dreary day in May The Sun was slowly drying a wet evening sky And as the last clouds fizzled and ebbed all away His twilight colors were able to blaze, then intensify The Sun saw the beauty Moon rising like his golden sigh For a few precious moments he felt enraptured in sweet bliss Then vowed to woo this maiden, so sent her a fiery kiss But Moon was quite content on her side of the aqua-blue sphere While to this day, Sun circles the globe always hopeful not to ever miss His true love’s full arrival, like in his dreams, she will appear written May 24,2020 The Sun And The Moon ' Poetry Contest Chantelle Anne Cooke sponsor

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Date: 5/28/2020 4:59:00 PM
This metaphoric write made me smile. "he felt enraptured in sweet bliss Then vowed to woo this maiden, so sent her a fiery kiss" - so romantic!
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Date: 5/26/2020 7:03:00 PM
Oh, so lovely! Such a fascinating expression dear Jeanne..To my faves...
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Date: 5/26/2020 9:02:00 AM
Nice...Sun chasing the moon...the moon has many lovers...I'm sorry for sun...
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Date: 5/25/2020 3:44:00 PM
Really enchanting! Dizain is an interesting form, and you have used it successfully in your lovely poem.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/25/2020 4:12:00 PM
Hello Malabika, thank you for commenting and I'm so happy you liked it.

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