Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"the Sun Inside"

My hands cover you like the warm ocean water
touching your feet...
Slowly creeping up your ankles as your body
feels the heat...
Your toes wiggling in the sheets like your feet
in the sand..
Another wave of sensation rides up your side
lightly touching your hand..
My eyes like sun rays gaze over your beach and bay..
No shade or umbrella can stop this heat that's upon you today..
Till the moon comes out and the sun goes away...
We will flourish in ourselves and always remember this day..

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Miranda Gilly August 11, 2010 at 9:09 PM Aweh, this one once again touched my soul, it made my body feel very full and calm and at ease, very captureing the molment(: loved it(: lik u said i wud. check yur inbox, you got mail(:

Juan Paolo Galua June 19, 2010 at 5:42 AM my gosh your poems are addicting...I wonder what kind of books do you read?

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2010 at 9:51 PM I see you got an HM Congratulations, hey where have you been lately? LUv, andera

Carol Sunshine Brown May 28, 2010 at 9:25 AM Congratulations on your win in Paula's " Feel The Feelings" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels May 27, 2010 at 5:37 AM passionate and sensual... love it :) - rgds Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 25, 2010 at 7:46 PM Congrats Michael on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy your special honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

James Peranteau May 25, 2010 at 6:11 AM Michael...this poetry is tender ,yet erotic softly...I'm glad that I peeked in on your poetry, I'll do it again ! james

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2010 at 10:25 PM and this is why you are a fav of MINE! zowie! andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta May 23, 2010 at 7:33 PM Very passionate write.

John Freeman May 23, 2010 at 7:13 PM A bit of the lighter side of yourself. Michael. Live is to be lived with someone your love. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards May 23, 2010 at 6:50 PM Delightfully sweet and sensual at the same time! Well done, Michael! :)

Skat A May 23, 2010 at 6:26 PM LOVELY ROMANTIC AND ALL THE GOOD STUFF IN THE INSIDE, LOVE IT,,SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire May 23, 2010 at 5:53 PM Think I need to favorite this so I can come back to it on lonely nights.

Carolyn Devonshire May 23, 2010 at 5:49 PM Please DON'T "stop this heat," Michael. I can feel the passion building in your words. Whew! Need a cold shower now. Awesome!! Love, Carolyn