"the Sun Inside"

My hands cover you like the warm ocean water
touching your feet...
Slowly creeping up your ankles as your body
feels the heat...
Your toes wiggling in the sheets like your feet
in the sand..
Another wave of sensation rides up your side
lightly touching your hand..
My eyes like sun rays gaze over your beach and bay..
No shade or umbrella can stop this heat that's upon you today..
Till the moon comes out and the sun goes away...
We will flourish in ourselves and always remember this day..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/11/2010 9:09:00 PM
Aweh, this one once again touched my soul, it made my body feel very full and calm and at ease, very captureing the molment(: loved it(: lik u said i wud. check yur inbox, you got mail(:
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:42:00 AM
my gosh your poems are addicting...I wonder what kind of books do you read?
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Date: 5/29/2010 9:51:00 PM
I see you got an HM Congratulations, hey where have you been lately? LUv, andera
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's " Feel The Feelings" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2010 5:37:00 AM
passionate and sensual... love it :) - rgds Wilma
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:46:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy your special honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 6:11:00 AM
Michael...this poetry is tender ,yet erotic softly...I'm glad that I peeked in on your poetry, I'll do it again ! james
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Date: 5/23/2010 10:25:00 PM
and this is why you are a fav of MINE! zowie! andrea
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Date: 5/23/2010 7:33:00 PM
Very passionate write.
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Date: 5/23/2010 7:13:00 PM
A bit of the lighter side of yourself. Michael. Live is to be lived with someone your love. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:50:00 PM
Delightfully sweet and sensual at the same time! Well done, Michael! :)
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:26:00 PM
LOVELY ROMANTIC AND ALL THE GOOD STUFF IN THE INSIDE, LOVE IT,,SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2010 5:53:00 PM
Think I need to favorite this so I can come back to it on lonely nights.
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Date: 5/23/2010 5:49:00 PM
Please DON'T "stop this heat," Michael. I can feel the passion building in your words. Whew! Need a cold shower now. Awesome!! Love, Carolyn
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