The Sun and the Moon

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With a beautiful red globe
The Sun reminds us each day that it begins
As the day wears on it gets hot 
According to its position above the earth 
And in the evening it sets in
Displaying huge colors behind it;
Sun’s movement is more or less 
Sure and certain with certain exceptions
When its movement is hindered 
Or its appearance is shadowed by other bodies;
The Sun is the hope and promise of our life
It leads us holding our hands throughout the day
Takes us to the threshold of the night with 
Promise to lead us again the next day 
It gives directions to life 
It gives health; in it the whole earth thrives.

But the moon is ever changing in its body and mood
Tonight Full Moon another night New Moon
Tonight Sickle Moon dangling at the corner of the sky
Another day it is found in the middle of it at noon 
Sometimes it is freckle and fading as if going to die
Sometimes bold; orange-red as if a rival to the Sun; 
But the moon takes birth in the romantic heart of man
Its position in evening or night sky moves humans  
To write innumerable lyrics;
Who forgets the peeping moon behind the leaves!
Who forgets even ever the Full Moon 
Illuminating the whole forest land at the dead of the night!
Its beauty attracts and moves the blind 
Its charm melts the emotive heart of the fool;
Who’s not a lover of the moon?  
Whom the moon does not love?
© Aju Mukhopadhyay, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/28/2020 4:52:00 AM
Dear Paula, your heart is romantic, so your comments. I thank you, I respect your love for Nature. And for Nette Onclaud, I appreciate your observation. Really I concentrated more but consumed lesser time here. Regards to both for your comments.
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Date: 8/24/2020 12:27:00 PM
I love the moon as many do. A wonderful story/poem. Enjoy your day writing away....................
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Date: 5/27/2020 3:13:00 PM
you gave much effort to this piece, aju...terrific!...soup mail for you!
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