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The Sun and Me

THE SUN AND ME
All day long I lay in the sun – the man in E R says it’s sunstroke
summer sun is hot is it shining today then no of course it’s not
The sun always shone when you were here. It seemed to know that you were near. But now the skies are always grey, Since the day you walked away
31st May 2023 A Monocu, Haiku and 4-lines of rhyme - same theme contest Sponsor - Tania Kitchin

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Date: 6/13/2023 2:25:00 AM
- Congratulations Bryn ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs
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Date: 6/12/2023 3:49:00 PM
Bryn, a creative set of poems, congratulations on your winning placement!
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