Cecilia Macfarlane Poet Rhyme

The Sun

Dear Lord I want to thank you for the sun
Without it the world would not have begun
For we need the sun in order to survive
Without it planet earth would not be alive

I like the sun for the beauty it brings
It grows our food, trees, among other things
It gives us warmth, sunrises, sunsets and joy
Brings endless happiness to each girl and boy

The sun reminds me of you lord, for you are the light
Giving hope to us all, every day and every night
The brightness of each brand new day reminds me of your love
Smiling down on each one of us from heaven up above

~Written with my son Daniel for religion homework~

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Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 4:31 PM You two work beautifully together! My 10 year old g'daughter and I often collaborate when she asks for help in her projects. It's fun and I am so pleased that she likes poetry! Hugs // paul

Neva Romaine March 13, 2015 at 8:57 AM Hey Cecilia, stopped by for a visit and found this wonderful tribute to our Heavenly Father for one of His most treasured gifts to us - the Sun. I am even more elated to see the loving care you have given your son in helping him to grow in the knowledge of our Creator and His Creation; and also in helping him to grow in his faith and love for others. God bless you both! Neva Cecilia Macfarlane March 14, 2015 at 11:15 AM Thank you Neva for the lovely comment.

Joseph May March 10, 2015 at 9:50 PM Beautiful poem you wrote with your son Cecilia....Hope he gets an A... Cecilia Macfarlane March 14, 2015 at 11:12 AM Thank you Joe

Len Gasun March 8, 2015 at 8:06 AM This is a very beautiful poem you wrote with your son my dear friend, Cecilia. You're a great sunshine to your son, too my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading my poem. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Cecilia Macfarlane March 9, 2015 at 8:57 PM Thank you Leonora for your kind and loving words. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis March 4, 2015 at 2:59 PM Well, dear Cecilia you came with your "Sun" to bring the Spring with the help of ...your son! A warm poem for the heart and an enlightening one for the spirit! Welcome back. Hope you will keep writing for you were missed! Cecilia Macfarlane March 9, 2015 at 8:56 PM Thank you Demetrios for such a sweet and thoughtful comment.

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2015 at 6:11 PM so lovely that you wrote it with your son. You are one great mother! Cecilia Macfarlane March 9, 2015 at 8:59 PM Thank you Andrea, you are sweet and kind, Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2015 at 2:38 PM - Finally .... your first poem in 2015 :))) !!! - And what poems, beautifully Cecilia !!! - How old is your son? ...... As clever as his mother! - Thanks for letting me read you work. - A great co-write, to be proud of :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2015 at 3:40 PM - Same age as my oldest grandson :))) Cecilia Macfarlane March 3, 2015 at 3:11 PM Thanks Anne Lise, finding the time to write has been a challenge lately, my son is 15. Take care. Hugs