The Sun

Exceeding beauty
Sparkling through the window pane
The sunshine glitters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rooker Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Thank you everyone!
Cooper Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Great Haiku, I really love to write in this form simple structure complex beauty. You have done it with style. into my favouites. love Shane xxx
Townsend Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 8:42 PM
What a lovely poem of the sun! I really like your haiku!
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