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The Sun

it's glorious I think that blast of radiant light hovering in the sky it glitters and shines so bright the star that can hold no claim that blinding orb in the sky now I know why people tend to go to the light It's one to be afraid of that flaming ball of beauty looks so violent now but glorious at dawn I don't think that many others look upon the star and thank it for the heat it shines to get us where we are

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Date: 10/15/2014 9:06:00 PM
truly glorious golden pen
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:58:00 AM
winderful write Destiny.....
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Date: 10/23/2013 11:24:00 AM
- Oh... a lovely written poem, Destiny !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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