The Sun

I will aim for the sun I will struggle to reside in the sky I will face the toughest storms I will stand firm when the wind blows I will focus on the light from above I will open my dark places to be lighten I will forget the mistakes of my past I will rely on the light that shines forever I will plant new trees for the sun is available I will weed out the intruder from my soil I will clean my farm for speedy germination I will smile as my sun watches me harvest each day.

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Skat A

Date: 7/1/2013 10:07:00 PM

OLIVIA, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/29/2013 4:19:00 PM

Olivia, a beautiful poem radiating hopeful inspiration. Reading the winning poems in the contests today. You realy are a winner here :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/28/2013 2:23:00 PM

Olivia congratulations on your outstanding win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/27/2013 4:52:00 PM

Lovely and Beautiful piece,Nice presentation...Congrats on your win....

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/27/2013 12:21:00 PM

Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 6/27/2013 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations, Olivia on your first place. What an inspiring poem you have written! Nature nourishes everything under the sun, and you appreciate it and take care of it. I wish you success and happiness. Peace & Love, Andrew.

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/26/2013 5:54:00 PM

Awesome inspirational verse, Olivia! Congratulations on your wonderful Ist Place win! Always, Annalise

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/27/2013 7:53:00 AM

To inspire is my priority . Keep following my writings

Donna Jones

Date: 6/26/2013 4:07:00 PM

This is awesome...so positive...congratulations on your top winning poem...

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/27/2013 7:54:00 AM

Thanks for enjoying my inspire message

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/26/2013 3:38:00 PM

lovely congrats on your win

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/27/2013 7:57:00 AM

Shadow, thanks for appreciating my poem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2013 3:05:00 PM

Hello Olivia, your poem was stunning, and I fully enjoyed what you had to offer... CONGRATULATIONS!!! you rock... luv~ PD

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/27/2013 8:08:00 AM

I will always love to contribute to poetry soup but it a unfortunate i can not be a premium member because there is no means to pay my membership fees. i have the money but in my country we don't use the credit card system. If poetrysoup could consider me paying through money order like western union.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/26/2013 2:14:00 PM

Lovely inspiration! Congratulations, Olivia!

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/27/2013 8:09:00 AM

Carrie, thanks for appreciating my poem. and i know the sun will shine in your favor.