The Sun

Slowly the sun creeps
Over the mountain top peeks
Sees itself and runs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 23, 2010 at 8:10 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Got a chuckle out of it too. Nice use of personification for an enjoyable poem. Thank you for your kind comment on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen
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February 18, 2010 at 5:55 PM
I love your Haiku...Love the sun seeing itself and running...lol...Enjoyed reading...Marty
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February 18, 2010 at 5:53 PM
Oh, this is precious, Laura, and thanks for your remark on my spring song. LUv, andrea
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February 12, 2010 at 12:31 AM
Beautiful write. Lovely small Poem with the wonderful word selection. Sun sees itself and runs. Excellent. Best wishes and love Ravindra.......Laura S
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