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The Sun

Pills and potions Ointment and lotions Don't always do the trick We swallow them to feel better But they can make us feel sick. Sick and ill Drugs that can kill Are taken every day Would we feel any better? If we throw this medicine away. And try to do without them, Except for the necessary ones, And make an effort To appreciate nature and the sun, Sunshine is healing It makes one feel good to be alive A relaxed and happy feeling Whelms up inside All your illnesses or concerns Become secondary for a while As the sun is shining bright And so is your smile.

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Date: 10/22/2023 7:42:00 PM
Sunshine warms the soul. It works for me, I'll tell you. Nicely penned, Shirley, and 'stay sunny inside' too! Sunlight and Warmth, Gershon
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:38:00 AM
Great word weaving here..
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Date: 10/20/2023 7:14:00 PM
enjoyed reading , sun is a friend and an enemy take care
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