Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Other

The Sun

sieving the sable shades~ springs up the scarlet sphere~ a solemn sunshine

                               
                                 lukewarm glowing rays
                           with soothing and healing touch~
                                     a cosmic power


                     A vibrant energy source for all living things
                     Sloth expelled and musings get spectacular wings
                     The quivering rays steadily gleam as silver
                     An eternal vigor praised as the food giver



Placed : 1st

A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest
Other poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Date: 08-06-2023

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2023 at 2:18 AM - Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs Patri Venkata Ramana June 16, 2023 at 10:32 PM Thank you so much for the best compliments.

Tania Kitchin June 12, 2023 at 3:29 PM Patri, a wonderful set of haikus, very creative, congratulations on your first place win! Patri Venkata Ramana June 16, 2023 at 10:31 PM Thank you so much for the best compliments.