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The Sun

sieving the sable shades~ springs up the scarlet sphere~ a solemn sunshine lukewarm glowing rays with soothing and healing touch~ a cosmic power A vibrant energy source for all living things Sloth expelled and musings get spectacular wings The quivering rays steadily gleam as silver An eternal vigor praised as the food giver Placed : 1st A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest Other poetry form only. Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Date: 08-06-2023

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Date: 6/13/2023 2:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/16/2023 10:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
Date: 6/12/2023 3:29:00 PM
Patri, a wonderful set of haikus, very creative, congratulations on your first place win!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/16/2023 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.

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