The Sun

sieving the sable shades~ springs up the scarlet sphere~ a solemn sunshine

                               
                                 lukewarm glowing rays
                           with soothing and healing touch~
                                     a cosmic power


                     A vibrant energy source for all living things
                     Sloth expelled and musings get spectacular wings
                     The quivering rays steadily gleam as silver
                     An eternal vigor praised as the food giver



Placed : 1st

A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest
Other poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Date: 08-06-2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 6/13/2023 2:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/16/2023 10:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
Date: 6/12/2023 3:29:00 PM
Patri, a wonderful set of haikus, very creative, congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 6/16/2023 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
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