The Sun

The day is falling
With the sun seeking shelter
We await its return
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 23, 2008 at 3:13 PM
Nice use alliteration in this haiku. Interesting use of personification. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Best wishes with your writing. karen
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October 21, 2008 at 7:02 PM
Lovely haiku...we will await till morning! ~ Carrie
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October 21, 2008 at 6:10 PM
Very nice writing Melanie. Truly enjoyed. Ghetto
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