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The Sun

The day is falling With the sun seeking shelter We await its return

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/23/2008 3:13:00 PM
Nice use alliteration in this haiku. Interesting use of personification. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Best wishes with your writing. karen
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Date: 10/21/2008 7:02:00 PM
Lovely haiku...we will await till morning! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/21/2008 6:10:00 PM
Very nice writing Melanie. Truly enjoyed. Ghetto
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