The Sun

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The perspective of the seasons can be so confusing. It still appears to me as though the sun is moving. After all, we are the center of the universe; at least I am....LOL

The Sun By Franklin Price 6/21/2018 The Sun is in the center Of our solar system space As our Earth rotates around it The seasons take their place The tilt of Earth the reason For the change in days and nights Makes it appear the Sunrise moving North to south and left to right Today the Sun has traveled To its very northern most Hardly any nighttime At the north pole and its post The Earth just keeps on moving It does not stop or stay Another Summer Solstice Is just one year away

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Daniel Turner

Date: 6/21/2018 9:09:00 AM

I like this one, Franklin. It flows well rhymes well and celebrates the first day of summer. Great job!