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The Summer Sun

The summer sun was once my friend; I basked beneath its glow, But friendships often fade and this Was one that had to go. The younger me enjoyed a tan On smooth and unlined skin, But lately that is not the shape My sagging self is in. And danger lurks when sunshine Causes cancer cells to bloom So by soaking up some rays I might be guaranteeing doom. There was a time Apollo Earned my every accolade, Yet today I turn my back on him And settle for the shade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/26/2014 7:20:00 PM
I've wondered now for quite some time. Do you think the sun's not as sublime. As days when we knew blissful ways. Basking in less intense rays.
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Date: 8/22/2014 9:38:00 PM
Wise words Hope everyone heeds them as cancer is so prevalent Surely there must be a God of the shade. Brilliant my dear. Edith
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Date: 8/21/2014 4:50:00 AM
- Enjoying the sun in the shade - Great poem, Ilene :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/20/2014 3:05:00 PM
Ilene, that was nicely done! I settle for the shade these days too :) Ana
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