Sasha K Poet Rhyme

The Suitcase

A blue-eyed man
knocked on the door to my heart.
I opened.
But the ways of life got us crushed
I realize I have to get unbroken.
Pack up the suitcase, leave for other parts
on to the unspoken.

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Skat A July 10, 2016 at 11:28 PM SASHA, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**

Juan Paolo Galua July 20, 2010 at 1:15 AM this compelled me,...lovely play of words Sasha...^_^ v

Michael J. Falotico July 9, 2010 at 3:06 PM Scares me a little , I have blue eyes too..... Nice write from the heart... the words grab you and make you listen.. always Michael

Destiny Budd July 9, 2010 at 1:38 PM I really like this write. It radiates sadness and something else I can't seem to put my finger on. Enjoyed very much.