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The Suicide

The tears silently Flow from her eyes And no one is here To hear her goodbyes She seals up the letters She's written to friends And hopes that today Her life finally ends She's tried this so many Times in her past She prays that this time It will be her last. She's lost and she's broken She's falling apart She pulls the trigger Of the gun to her heart Her breath slowly stops As she falls to the floor Her life slips away As she walk through death's door This time she's succeeded In ending her pain She's finally happy She won't hurt again.

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Date: 9/11/2021 6:29:00 AM
Saskia, the emotion of your writes are so real. Sadly so many suicides. A desperate moment…one unimaginable. Thank you for being real.
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Saskia Eugene
Date: 9/11/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 9/11/2021 6:11:00 AM
Very emotive piece of work. Keep on writing!
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