Poetic Form: Rhyme Inspired: 2024 April 23 Image: 48th Happy Birthday by Giphytemu
The day you were born went back to the hospital where I was forewarned a little bit into the night your mother, I just told to rest her sleepy head as I held you in the light it's the drugs go to bed I guess it'd be the norm as the test-taker I am, first as father-dad form you're evidence I exam I feel like your mom now she passed you on to me ... ~0~ ~0~ ~0~ as those years were meant to be forty-eight years and more, WOW, six trailed the starter of the family. ~0~ ~0~ ~0~ April 23, 1976 HAPPY 48th BIRTHDAY ALOHA ~MY~ SON ~0~ ~0~ ~0~
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