** Poetic Form: Senryu Inspired: 2024 September 03 Image: N/A
if you are in deep water ~ you're in a fix/catch can't patch nor fix it blowing thing/s out from water ~ is winning and let the loser know it to be like oil and water ~ whence aha moment be a couple's fate to cast one's bread on water ~ whence thank you's silence is golden ... and more
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