The Struggles Within

With the happiness you feel,
And the emotions that are so strong and real.

Never would you think it could take anything,
Yet here you stand just withering.

Down the spiral you swiftly go
No one can tell because no one knows.

Faster and faster the visions get blurry,
Just wishing for something to keep you sturdy.

Nothing or know one can ease your doubts,
Until you decide you really want out.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lane Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 4:51 PM
Nice poem...great job! Chris
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July 27, 2012 at 6:12 AM
Another true poem here...a person who's not happy and is going through a struggle in a relationship has to decide for themselves to move on..excellent piece!!!
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