Andrew Crisci Poet Rhyme

The Strongest Love

All these years I believed in your sincerity,
bonded by blood and common destiny,
I sacrificed all to let you live and breathe easier...
and has that made your load much lighter? 
Don't be someone I can't trust anymore...distrust can be
the bitterest word to break the strongest love very quickly.

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John Freeman December 19, 2011 at 5:53 PM "...distrust can be the bitterest word to break the strongest love very quickly." For sure, Andrew. Congrats on your worthy poetry. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2011 at 3:32 PM I really liked this one and now I am wondering who it could be? Congrats on your HM, Andrew

Ralph Taylor December 19, 2011 at 12:07 PM Congrats, Andy. Great write. Nice going. Happy Holidays to you and yours. Ralph

Jon Arno December 19, 2011 at 6:49 AM Congratulations on your entry in the Sixes And Sevens contest :)

Carol Sunshine Brown December 19, 2011 at 6:25 AM Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Sixes And Sevens" contest Andrew. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman December 16, 2011 at 3:24 PM such profoundness here, Andrew, harry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 16, 2011 at 3:38 AM words for thought x