The Strict Judge(Senryu)

The judges gavel banged
Order in my court he roared
All sound disappeared.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
October 26, 2008 at 5:58 AM
Never want to be there. A powerful force. Vivid imagery with these few words. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
October 25, 2008 at 4:14 PM
I been there Patricia - Never a good thing to upset a Judge - Especially if years of your life hang in the balance - Thats a lesson this knucklehead had to learn the hard way - This poem is great it took me there in a single heartbeat - God Bless
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