The Streams Are My Veins

Shall I compare you, O streams, with my very veins? 
Let me do it; let me see who loses who gains; 
My veins fill up my body; full of flesh-and-blood;
Your presence fills each thud, spud, flood and little bud...! 

Pulmonary, umbilical, muscular, Ha! 
Hearing all these, I, a simple man, stand in awe; 
I know you quench my thirst and refresh me until,
Unquenchable thirst is evoked toward God still...!  

One-way valve, they say; duckbill valve; venae cavae; 
Your works, O streams, I just can't leave, believe; perceive;
You serve as takers of blood from organ to heart, 
Your functioning could be compared to a fine-art...! 

Oxygen to tissues, is like sun to flower, 
Streams, midst sun and shower, like clouds, each reach hover;
Veins in me keep me endlessly till end alive,
Streams assist mother earth to eternally survive...!


13 August 2022
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August 15, 2022 at 10:33 PM
So happy to have come across this soulful write
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August 13, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Brilliant write! This gonna reap a high placement. All the best in the contest.
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