The Stream 'story Poem'

It was as if it were just a dream,
I went for a picnic beside the stream.
There I met the girl I thought was for me,
I first saw her beneath the Sycamore tree.

She was silent as she stood there,
Her legs so long, her hair so fair.
We made love there at that spot,
Time stood still, I’ve never forgot.

It was a passion that lasted for hours,
Down amongst the spring scented flowers.
She left as she arrived, without a word,
I felt truly alive, as free as a bird.

Whenever I go back, she is nowhere to be found,
The stream flows past, it makes the only sound.
In my heart she’ll be with me, I’ve kept her a space,
As I recall that moment by the stream, a magical place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alex Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:38 AM
"In my heart she’ll be with me, I’ve kept her a space, As I recall that moment by the stream, a magical place" - Great! Congratulations!
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:21 AM
A mystical romance, lovely, Paige, congratulations:)
Conn Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Jack and Jill went up the hill, each had a buck and a quarter ... Jill came down with two fifty. =]
Turner Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 7:55 AM
lucky Jill x
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