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The Stream

I guess that love is like a stream, starting strong, maybe some rocks in between. A strange wonderful path it may take, with different features in its wake. But it may split further down the line, and maybe rejoin after some time. Always connected by its past, always hoping it will last. But if it has to take a different route, let’s just hope it’s one that'll suit. For at the end of the stream is the sea, I thought that would be our destiny. Only time can tell how we'll flow, I guess that only time will show.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 9:20:00 AM
Great poem! I love it! :)
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Date: 10/5/2009 5:17:00 PM
Beautifully rhymed. All the best.
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Date: 10/1/2009 4:54:00 PM
interesting, thoughtful and thought provoking! Light & Love
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:22:00 PM
beautiful poem, Hi Ciaran and welcome to soup, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Ciaran. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ciaran. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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