The Story of Your Life

When you were young And you played ball in the backyard Before the jerks and the skirts And you smoked your first cigarette. And what you saw at night Before the freaks and The losses of speech and the campfires After the dawn but way before You moved on to lay in this bed Did you ever think of me? Did you look down at the page and see me? What will you write when you write The story of your life?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Marszalowicz Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 10:41 AM
This may be good as is I feel the importance of the person in question. good work dude!
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 4:41 PM
It might be finished, it hasn't made up its mind.
Chaudhry Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 6:00 AM
i feel nostalgic.. how we all felt this way but forgot it in our struggle to be cold and detached as we grew up.. thank you for articulating what many of us had forgotten to feel...
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Thank you for this comment.
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