The Story Of My Life

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Andrea Dietrich's A 5-Liner on your Life Poetry Contest... submitted 18 Mar 2025

When seasons glide along life's dream to raise the kiln of compassion... a healing smile, a touch agleam can nourish hearts' indecision my students... flamed with a vision!

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/25/2025 1:06:00 PM

Nette, as I first started reading and came across "kiln" I was wondering what you meant...but that quickly resolved in a remarkable way with the rest of the poem. This is truly a the story of what we go through in life....trying to figure out what to do. If you help others in any way with this important question, what a great service accomplished! Smiles!!!

Terry Miller

Date: 3/23/2025 3:48:00 AM

This is so well written, congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2025 3:05:00 PM

I adored this one and gosh, I did not remember. You had been teacher?. Let me soupmail you why it didn't get higher on my list.

Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2025 9:04:00 PM

Okay, are you a teacher? :) Anyway, wise advice beautifully done

Silent One

Date: 3/18/2025 7:38:00 AM

The story of your life in only a few words??? I am sure you have so much more to share my friend.. I like what you did here and wish you all the best in the contest.. Peace and blessings..