The Storm's Prelude

.                                             Pitty-Pat-Pat-Pat
                                    It taps on my tin black roof
                                          The storm says,"Hello."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Yarnell Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 11:53 AM
nice
Edmonds Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Amazing imagery, I like haiku's.
Moreno Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Excellent descriptions, love the way how the storm greets. The first line is genius...Raul
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