The Storm

the storm in his head no switch for him to turn off more pills numb his mind Written 1st February 2020 Contest: Senryu on Mind Sponsor: Jenish Somadas HONORABLE MENTION Contest: Strand Select A Sponsor: Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2020 4:07:00 AM

- Congratulations, Ann :) - Enjoy reading it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:19:00 AM

Bless you dear Anne-Lise, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2020 3:35:00 PM

A sad situation for those who must numb their minds. Congrats on the win, Ann

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:19:00 AM

yes so sad, but so true... thanks Andrea for your congrats with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/4/2020 12:48:00 AM

Thank you for participating in the contest with your wonderful Senryu Ann.. I'm honoured..

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:18:00 AM

I too am honoured for my placement in your contest dear Jenish and thank you for sponsoring and judging the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/2/2020 11:18:00 PM

Hi Anne, Strong haiku! Congrats on your win!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Sam, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/1/2020 3:13:00 PM

The worst of storms expressed in the best of Haiku dearest, Ann! xxx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/1/2020 4:38:00 PM

Such storms are like a living hell. Thank you dearest friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/1/2020 9:29:00 AM

Poignant, Ann. Well done.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/1/2020 12:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Line I really appreciate your comments. with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2020 6:55:00 AM

Hard to live with a storm like that--well depicted, Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/1/2020 12:24:00 PM

Yes Vijay it certainly is... thank you for your comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/1/2020 4:58:00 AM

Powerful one Ann, you've said a lot in those three lines and this is exactly how it is. Good luck, and hope you're better today. Tom.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/1/2020 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Yes I had a better night thanks, but still so tired. Will endeavour to walk by the sea in the hope it will perhaps energise me... Have a good day Tom. With kindest thoughts Ann xx