The Stones

The stones quivered,
pulsing in her hands
their beauty enthralling.

written 04/12/2014
by Shadow Hamilton
contest Just Ten Words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 4:47 PM
I came here to thank you for the high praise on Cinder Girl and saw this really nice little poem you had made with ten words. Look down and don't see any congratulations on it. Looked down further and saw you got it in too late for the contest. DANG. It was a Good one!!
Hamilton Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 6:25 PM
lol my fault for delaying Andrea soup mail hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 6:14 PM
This one makes me smile:0)
Carrillo Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 5:41 PM
A beauty of ten words put together. Thanks for sharing,,,, Lucilla
Harrell Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 11:28 PM
I can see the beauty of it jumped up and hit you :) Expressive write!
Hamilton Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 8:13 AM
ty so much Toquyen hugs
Vaso Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Nice write, I just read a book and this reminds me of that!!
Hamilton Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 8:11 AM
ty Arthur hugs
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