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The Stone Remembers

the river forgets each stone it k i s s e s g o o d b y e yet..... the stone remembers

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2025 8:06:00 PM

I came back to face this. It is ingenious

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/27/2025 7:25:00 PM

Fantastic teaching Billie. I like the form as well. The stone remembers the smooth, cool kiss of the river because it gives a piece of itself to the river. The stone changes the river, adds to the soul of it. The river may not be aware, or remember, but that's ok, because the stone has added to the life of the river anyway...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2025 8:37:00 PM

Fabulous. Congrats on the win

Billie Jama
Date: 4/28/2025 12:28:00 AM

Thank you so kindly