The Stinging See

The Stinging See

taste 
     those
           flowing
                   pains,

suck-up
 that sorrow

kiss
    the
       skull,

face facts
     as

you stop
 the big

fake
    false
        facade...

it stings
a little

to
 really
       see

6-17-07
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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February 1, 2012 at 6:07 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you James. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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