The Steaming Train

A train steamed away tonight
Taking you away from me

I arrive at the station too late
To find you gone with the wind's tale

With your forgotten scarf in my hand
I tried to fly to your new land
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bellefleur Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 7:27 AM
wonderful imagery - I like the significance of the scarf in your hand - all that you have left of a departed friend/loved one..
Burton Avatar
December 25, 2008 at 5:47 AM
sounds like a lost love one, any way or you missed the train huh. i love the end and how it sums every thing up, beatifully written and seems like it should be longer.
Higgins Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 8:20 AM
I just love this write. It is magical..the last line is terrific. Great job!
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