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The Stars That Never Die

A bible rests upon the desk, the spine is worn, brown hide 
Bearing lists of names of noble men, and dates within a clan
Contained between two pages,  hides a letter from a man
Designed to be for one, alone, declaring love that died
Etched with swirls, in ink, a poem, a link to words of love
Foretelling someone's future, that could never bloom in full
Garnished words of lover's gold, a story, never told
Held in arms of fate that knew this love could never grow
Interred, nearby a grave , a girl, as ancient stories go
Just as  love,  the blossom died, before it could unfold
Kept confined, quite ill in bed with a what had seemed a cold
Lily Rose would die and chance of love would die as well
Many eyes have seen this  yellowed letter that I hold
Never meant for eyes besides the gentle Lily Rose 
Odd that it comes by light of day, to me their story told
Passed down to me, the ages waned, a place it shouldn't be
Questions we will seek today, are tossed against the wind
Rising once again, as the brittle page is turned
Some stars  are burned, and die too young,  and not for us to own
Tales of love have flown too far,  to shine among the stars
Underneath the light that shines into my lonely room
Voices in the dark of night,  are voices of the moon
Whispered words of love unveiled, had fate been not so cruel
Xanadu holds captive all the secrets and the clues
Yesterday has come and gone, the stars will say goodbye
Zealous love has come and gone, but love can never die




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7/8/15  For Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
Leiser Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:54 AM
Such beautiful imagery and words woven throughout your poem, Connie! Congrats on your win :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 5:38 AM
very well written apart from spelling / or wrong use of tense in your K line change lie to either lies or laid Carrie for a better flow congrats on placing hugs
Richards Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:29 AM
Thanks Shadow, yes.......I see my error in grammar, which somehow I overlooked while editing. You have a good eye! Thank you for the help, and for the placement !!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 12:28 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Carrie!
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 5:55 PM
This ABC poem is awesome !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 5:41 PM
the imagery is wonderful and the story flows so beautifully Carrie - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 12:07 AM
I love that last part. So romantic the last two lines. And the buildup to it with the tragic story. You will surely garner a top spot with this one, Carrie.
Pinet Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Love is a song and thus unaffected by time which can only change the words but fails to alter the tune that remains in harmony with both heart and soul. Emile.
K. Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 1:13 PM
and the story you have woven here, also made me think, on whether this is a true account? Yet again, you write with heart and grace-- I sure hope this gets top spot! This is such a fascinating tale, written with such ease and fluidity, I really enjoyed this. And since I am on "star" mode-- can't help but hear "Lost Stars" playing in my head-- are you familiar with that song? Keira Knightly sang it, and Adam Levine has a version of it, too. Loved hearing from you, miss you dear Carrie! Thank you!
K. Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 1:09 PM
The title alone is riveting for me, having read somewhere that some stars (or is it all?) that we see, have already died, but since they're so far away, their light reaches us long after they have died. Sorry if I strayed from your wonderful poem... it was such a delight to hear from you Carrie! I have been meaning to email you, and I will one of these days! You had me double-checking the first letters here, since this just flowed so well for me-- the thoughts, everything ..cont'd
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:18 AM
Oh Carrie, this is most beautiful. I didnt realize it was an abecedarian until almost the end. That is how smooth your poem flowed. What a touching love story that will sky rocket all the way to the top I predict! 7 the picture truly adds to the class of your poem too.
Konos Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 6:57 PM
WELL! You just went out of your way to be GREAT! HERE'S AND CHEERS TO YA!
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