Cole Banner Poet Rhyme

The Stars Beyond the Sunset

Walk with me
the water's edge,
when the sun
and sea have met...
Our shadow's long,
the day is gone,
but it's not
dark just yet...
A kiss, and passion
fills our souls,
as the beauty
of the night unfolds...
Lovers now
-  in silhouette,
we share the stars
beyond the sunset...
 
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Susan Ashley July 12, 2018 at 9:13 PM Your poem is enchanting, Cole. Romance gift-wrapped in your beautifully silky expression. Gorgeous! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Cole Banner July 13, 2018 at 11:18 AM Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoy my work. CB

Pandita Sietesantos June 12, 2018 at 11:43 AM Enthralling! Hugs. Pandita Cole Banner June 12, 2018 at 2:05 PM Glad you liked it. Thank you.

Alexis Y. August 25, 2015 at 10:15 PM Cole, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis Cole Banner August 26, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thank you so much.

Shirley Rebstock August 25, 2015 at 1:49 PM Beutiful Cole Banner August 25, 2015 at 3:42 PM Thank you

Judy Konos August 25, 2015 at 7:30 AM Your poem is good but your name is "Mind Blowing" WOW....meanwhile Congratulations on your Big Win! Cole Banner August 25, 2015 at 8:12 AM Thank you. Glad you like both Judy...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 25, 2015 at 2:31 AM Exquisite write Cole! Congrats on first place win with this real romantic marvel!~ Cole Banner August 25, 2015 at 8:13 AM Thank you for your kind words...

Skat A August 24, 2015 at 10:52 PM Hi Cole, read this over and over... Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT Cole Banner August 25, 2015 at 8:13 AM Awesome! Thank you so much...

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 4:26 PM Cole,. Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA Cole Banner March 19, 2014 at 6:45 PM Thank you!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 19, 2014 at 1:45 AM Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, cole Cole Banner March 19, 2014 at 6:45 PM Thank you!

Skat A March 18, 2014 at 10:05 PM Cole, A lot of Heart And Soul, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~ Cole Banner March 19, 2014 at 6:46 PM Thank you!

Kim Merryman October 22, 2013 at 1:36 PM Cole, this is a lovely, romantic write. I like the smooth, even flow and rhyme. Well done! Love, Kim