The Stars Beyond the Sunset

Walk with me
the water's edge,
when the sun
and sea have met...
Our shadow's long,
the day is gone,
but it's not
dark just yet...
A kiss, and passion
fills our souls,
as the beauty
of the night unfolds...
Lovers now
-  in silhouette,
we share the stars
beyond the sunset...
 
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:13:00 PM
Your poem is enchanting, Cole. Romance gift-wrapped in your beautifully silky expression. Gorgeous! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/13/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoy my work. CB
Date: 6/12/2018 11:43:00 AM
Enthralling! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/12/2018 2:05:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thank you.
Date: 8/25/2015 10:15:00 PM
Cole, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis
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Cole Banner
Date: 8/26/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 8/25/2015 1:49:00 PM
Beutiful
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Cole Banner
Date: 8/25/2015 3:42:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/25/2015 7:30:00 AM
Your poem is good but your name is "Mind Blowing" WOW....meanwhile Congratulations on your Big Win!
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Date: 8/25/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you like both Judy...
Date: 8/25/2015 2:31:00 AM
Exquisite write Cole! Congrats on first place win with this real romantic marvel!~
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Date: 8/25/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words...
Date: 8/24/2015 10:52:00 PM
Hi Cole, read this over and over... Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
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Date: 8/25/2015 8:13:00 AM
Awesome! Thank you so much...
Date: 3/19/2014 4:26:00 PM
Cole,. Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/19/2014 1:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, cole
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Date: 3/19/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/18/2014 10:05:00 PM
Cole, A lot of Heart And Soul, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 6:46:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/22/2013 1:36:00 PM
Cole, this is a lovely, romantic write. I like the smooth, even flow and rhyme. Well done! Love, Kim
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