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The Stars Are Asleep

~ the stars are asleep ~
~ dawn takes a place in the sun ~
       ~ wish on hold til dusk ~


Date written and posted: 12/03/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Nice imagery in such a few words, Edward. Enjoyed reading
Ibeh Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Thank you so much, Eve!:-)
Sands Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Very nice Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi!:-) Most appreciated.
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