The Stars

I do not take ownership of this writing. I simply let my students write. The author is 11 years old. JB

The Stars
When I look up at the stars at night
Sitting all lonely and shining bright
I think about the day I had
Whether I've been good or bad

I think about the work I've done
Whether the day was boring or so much fun
I think about the people I've seen
Whether I've been good or mean

Day after day, I think and think
And the stars just listen and blink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 24, 2016 at 8:56 AM
oooo okay... :)
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June 10, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Wow...very impressive for an eleven year old..please relay my congradulations to his young talent..clearly in good hands;-) rgds, 7habang
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